Another week, another theme. I'm still reading Magyk, as I've been caught up reading stories on different websites and such, so I haven't read much from my current story.
Anyway, the theme for this week is to write about a plot twist that would have made your book more interesting. I don't know how long my explanation will be, but....yeaaaah...
So I think if the Hunter wouldn't have beem mislead by the illusion Marcia created, the book would've ended a lot quicker. They would've caught up to the Heap's boat, shot Jenna, either shot or kidnapped the rest of the people with her, and that sorta would've ended the story, making it about 400 pages shorter and a lot suckier....And it would've been more interesting because I would've sat there wondering '...what did I just read?'
....Can you say short and to the point?
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Time Read This Week: 2hrs, 10min
Total Time Read: 26hrs, 35min
Total Books Read: 3
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